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[Naruto starts a band]

Concept visualiztion down................

Well, I am not a fan of alot of anime knockoffs things as such as this, but I will say that the concept was a good beginning for a plot line. If the is smooth animation, I can overlook the drawing, but here neither was well presented. More over, aren't all of those songs from GH III or is that pure coincidence (except dragonforce song) The story plot, as stated, was a good one, making for some good parody comedy, but in he end it just seemed to kick me in the face in stead of astonish it.

[Superhuman: SDO Day #13.5]

It was........

I thought this was alot better than that last movie that was made as "Day #13" which was highly offensive (only because it was put out as all audiences). It could have been better with some shopped up DDr arrows that actually moved to the beat. Also, switch up the character motion, it would be cool to have a strange loop of odd movements that will entertain and get laughs rather than borer the audience after 30-40 seconds. As for sound, it seemed to drone on rather than completely thrill or keep me focused.

mamaluigi responds:

I know... the other day #13 wasnt made by me, but rather by some missguided fan of mine.

But yeah... making the arrows in sync with the flash takes too much work... so meh.

[Randomnesss]

Well.........

Why is it looked converted. I put no accusation upon you, but it is odd that you made it and it is not a SWF format. Other than that tiny thing, it was a fair addition to the stick movies that swarm the internet.

Wacraw responds:

It looks converted cause it is converted. This is the other movie I made entirely in Movie Maker. Thats the reason why its so pixelated. And intend for this one to be my last! I am committed to finding something better to make my movies cause, lets face it, without a proper flash program making flash movies sucks. Thanks for the comment! : )

[Twisted Minds Ep. 2]

Good.......

The concept was very smart, I haven't seen those in a while, so it is good to see someone make a refresher on the concept. the comedy had some good moments and some weak ones, but my major draws are the drawing and voice acting. There was a little stiff movement sometimes and all of the voice acting felt like it was missing heart, especially when in danger, there was more of depressed scare than a suprised and frightened one. All in all, Okay

Triple-Elemental responds:

Thanks, some voice acting I agree was lacking, we will try to improve on that in the next one.

[Irish Mice]

well............

The artistry was something that i can compliment, but the fact it was a constant loop with music really stole from what could have been good. Also, I'm not sure I remember the crediting for the creator of the song.

Gizzo responds:

The truth is I don't know who writ the song! I got it off Limewire and it said it was Flogging Molly but I have my doubts.

[Street Cats]

I liked it for the most part

I thought the drawings were excellent, but the voice acting was on the weaker spectrum. Another thing is you could have had a lot more character motion in stead of mostly standstill dialog (misspelled?). Another fix could be the story plotting, make it a little more interesting. You could have done alot more and got a lot of laughs out of the diamond plot, but instead of seizing it, it turned quickly to a conclusion. Also, throw some backround audio or subtle things, it always will keep the attention.

Cryomancer responds:

Thanks for your review.

The first episode is kind of an introduction to the characters. Even so we have tried hard with the story and any more jokes crammed in and i'd be reading reviews about the jokes being too forced.

The second episode is a lot longer, it looks like we're going to have to split it into two seperate submissions, but it has a good storyline and I'll be adding hand gestures to try and fill in the gap.

Thanks for your review man.

[SlashClassic16: Washu <3]

um.....

Couldn't Finish it........

SlashFirestorm responds:

What are your crimes? What have you done to me? Go on, tell me. What have you done to me?

[The Fail Movie]

It was intresting

You had some good humor in there, especially the T-Rex, I thought that was pretty funny. I hope to see the new stuff.

RyanTime2 responds:

Yup, this isn't full version, yet, I have at least, 2-3 more flashes to go.

[Tankmen For]

sigh..............

I'm very sad, I was looking towards a really good video, but instead I saw something that I shouldn't have, and there was clear violation of the guidlines, but I have no control over it.

Sevkat responds:

Suprisingly, I broke not a single rule.
That's a fucking first.

[The Pen is Mightier...]

Experience

You are a person who truly has mastered their arts in flash, at first I though it was crap, but when it started to change I learned that the movie wasn't crap, I am.