TorchedBear's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Irish Mice]

well............

The artistry was something that i can compliment, but the fact it was a constant loop with music really stole from what could have been good. Also, I'm not sure I remember the crediting for the creator of the song.

Gizzo responds:

The truth is I don't know who writ the song! I got it off Limewire and it said it was Flogging Molly but I have my doubts.

[Street Cats]

I liked it for the most part

I thought the drawings were excellent, but the voice acting was on the weaker spectrum. Another thing is you could have had a lot more character motion in stead of mostly standstill dialog (misspelled?). Another fix could be the story plotting, make it a little more interesting. You could have done alot more and got a lot of laughs out of the diamond plot, but instead of seizing it, it turned quickly to a conclusion. Also, throw some backround audio or subtle things, it always will keep the attention.

Cryomancer responds:

Thanks for your review.

The first episode is kind of an introduction to the characters. Even so we have tried hard with the story and any more jokes crammed in and i'd be reading reviews about the jokes being too forced.

The second episode is a lot longer, it looks like we're going to have to split it into two seperate submissions, but it has a good storyline and I'll be adding hand gestures to try and fill in the gap.

Thanks for your review man.

[SlashClassic16: Washu <3]

um.....

Couldn't Finish it........

SlashFirestorm responds:

What are your crimes? What have you done to me? Go on, tell me. What have you done to me?

[The Fail Movie]

It was intresting

You had some good humor in there, especially the T-Rex, I thought that was pretty funny. I hope to see the new stuff.

RyanTime2 responds:

Yup, this isn't full version, yet, I have at least, 2-3 more flashes to go.

[Tankmen For]

sigh..............

I'm very sad, I was looking towards a really good video, but instead I saw something that I shouldn't have, and there was clear violation of the guidlines, but I have no control over it.

Sevkat responds:

Suprisingly, I broke not a single rule.
That's a fucking first.